True Love- hot or cold? tercet
Love is a smoldering ember,
Hot passion searing few bold
It can never be a drop of dew, cold
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Love is a smoldering ember,
Hot passion searing few bold
It can never be a drop of dew, cold
picture from internet
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Better – “Love is a smold’ring ember” – Makes the poem a perfect haiku.
Submitted by Nancy Jackson on June 28th, 2011 10:34 pm