True Love- hot or cold? tercet

Love is a smoldering ember,

Hot passion searing few bold

It can never be a drop of dew, cold

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  1. Better – “Love is a smold’ring ember” – Makes the poem a perfect haiku.

    Submitted by Nancy Jackson on June 28th, 2011 10:34 pm

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